Before I read the story, I wanted to comment: I really appreciate that you included a worldbuilding document along with your horny monsterfucking smut. I have a couple monsterfucker erotica story-worlds of my own (including a sci-fi one), and I've got a lore-dump document for them, separate from the stories I sell. It's nice to see other people doing things in a similar fashion! Just because a story's full of fucking doesn't mean it can't be full of worldbuilding, too. Not everyone gets that!
In general I loved this book, but what thing that really stuck with me was this one bit of world building where an automatic translator had issues with a colloquial term and just that stuck with me as such a clever thing to write, but also I felt like it paralleled Dr Del’s exploration into other species so well and like, emphasize the importance of actually interacting with your subject of study over just learning about it from books and reports.
listen this book is hot and you should read it! I’m just focusing in on one little point and don’t think because of my comment it’s not a fuckfest because it literally is and I’m here for it.
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Before I read the story, I wanted to comment: I really appreciate that you included a worldbuilding document along with your horny monsterfucking smut. I have a couple monsterfucker erotica story-worlds of my own (including a sci-fi one), and I've got a lore-dump document for them, separate from the stories I sell. It's nice to see other people doing things in a similar fashion! Just because a story's full of fucking doesn't mean it can't be full of worldbuilding, too. Not everyone gets that!
In general I loved this book, but what thing that really stuck with me was this one bit of world building where an automatic translator had issues with a colloquial term and just that stuck with me as such a clever thing to write, but also I felt like it paralleled Dr Del’s exploration into other species so well and like, emphasize the importance of actually interacting with your subject of study over just learning about it from books and reports.
listen this book is hot and you should read it! I’m just focusing in on one little point and don’t think because of my comment it’s not a fuckfest because it literally is and I’m here for it.
Yes...Yes! It's such an important theme for the story, I'm glad it hit! Also thank you so much for the lovely comment~